Looking for feedback on a gamified tutorial

Hi all,

This is my first post, and I am excited to share something I am working on and hear your thoughts.

I play a lot of MOBA games (Massive Online Battle Arena) and I was really inspired on these games to create a gamified learning solution.

I was given the task to create a course about Strategic Thinking and I immediately thought about the games I play. Not only they teach you to think strategically, improvise and manage your Mana, but also, these games are all about collaborating with your team and to assign roles to each member. While playing the game you gain experience to unlock new skills that will help your team win, and so on. 

I made this draft as a tutorial for the actual Storyline course, the tutorial will teach you how the game will work, how you can unlock new skills and how you can make more points.

This is just a draft but I look forward to hear any comments on this!

You can check it out here:
http://googledrive.com/host/0B6O3TsLZ_O7PaUlEZ0dZQ2JJMlU