Anyone willing to critique my first course lesson?

Hi All,

I'm putting together my first elearning course that's completely online and will be accessed via Moodle. I would really really appreciate opinions on my first lesson before I move any further as I feel this needs to act as a template for the other lessons. I wouldn't be comfortable posting the link here but I could private message or email anyone who is interested as I would greatly appreciate all of your expert instructional design advice.

Thanks so much,

L