Feedback on first story Feb 22, 2018 By rob whyte Hi folks, I'm new here. I've been playing with Storyline for a week and just finished my first project. Looking for any sort of feedback, if you don't mind. http://www.eslwriting.org/wp-content/storyline/book-report-c/story_html5.html Cheers, rob bookreport-cover-1.png
Les Helyes 6 years ago02/22/18 at 5:31 pm (UTC) Great job! I had a bit of a problem getting the Rule #2 arrow to display the ideas perhaps the hot spot should be larger? Also, I would add an Exit Course button at the end. Really nice work Rob! Congrats.
Sandy O'Brien 6 years ago02/22/18 at 5:52 pm (UTC) Good job! Yes increasing the hot spot over the arrows is needed.
Ridvan Saglam 6 years ago02/22/18 at 9:18 pm (UTC) Hi Rob, I like it. Actually, it made me want to prepare one for my students too. Hope to see more works of you. By the way, I want to suggest a few book report templates which I used with my students, https://www.paperzip.co.uk/resource/book-review-templates/
rob whyte Author Ridvan Saglam 6 years ago02/22/18 at 10:53 pm (UTC) Thanks Ridvan. Will take a look at those book report templates.
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Great job! I had a bit of a problem getting the Rule #2 arrow to display the ideas perhaps the hot spot should be larger? Also, I would add an Exit Course button at the end.
Really nice work Rob! Congrats.
Good job! Yes increasing the hot spot over the arrows is needed.
Hi Rob,
I like it. Actually, it made me want to prepare one for my students too. Hope to see more works of you.
By the way, I want to suggest a few book report templates which I used with my students, https://www.paperzip.co.uk/resource/book-review-templates/
Thanks Ridvan. Will take a look at those book report templates.
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