Not sure if this is the right place but I would like some feedback on my eLearning portfolio. Everything is built within Storyline and I tried to offer a variety of courses to show my range of layout, design,and content.
If you have time, let me know what you think...thanks
At first glance would suggest the name (top-right) is changed to something that makes more sense, or left out completely. Change the grey background to something different, and your Twitter button makes reference to LinkedIn.
Have not looked at the courses yet, but looks very elegant - well done.
This is a very clean and professional looking portfolio providing a good variety of styles. In addition to Bruce's comments, I could not exit from the Nikon presentation (there was no obvious back link or close button).
I like it .... have confidence .... put it out there!
Great project, Dana! Will you host this on your own server or domain? I find Dropbox is sluggish and that can impact how clients perceive your portfolio.
I would remove the transparency from your "About Me", "My Services" & "Contact Me" links. Being able to view the base layer through the information box on each of these makes your message more difficult to see.
Thanks for all the feedback - I will definitely be reviewing it again and take your suggestions. It's great to have an outsider's perspective. I might place it on my own site but may leave it in dropbox for now...haven't decided.
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Hi,
Looks lovely
At first glance would suggest the name (top-right) is changed to something that makes more sense, or left out completely. Change the grey background to something different, and your Twitter button makes reference to LinkedIn.
Have not looked at the courses yet, but looks very elegant - well done.
Bruce
Dana,
This is a very clean and professional looking portfolio providing a good variety of styles. In addition to Bruce's comments, I could not exit from the Nikon presentation (there was no obvious back link or close button).
I like it .... have confidence .... put it out there!
Good luck,
Sam
Looks nice, I would get rid of the player or at the very least recolour it get rid of the volume button and title.
Change the html background colour, set the player to scale.
I dont like the hover effect on the text where it changes case just looks wrong to me, and at least one of them the text jumps
Otherwise really nice, make sure it works for when you sned out to clients.
Great project, Dana! Will you host this on your own server or domain? I find Dropbox is sluggish and that can impact how clients perceive your portfolio.
Love seeing all the creativity in this community!
I would remove the transparency from your "About Me", "My Services" & "Contact Me" links. Being able to view the base layer through the information box on each of these makes your message more difficult to see.
That being said, this is all in all a great job!
Thanks for all the feedback - I will definitely be reviewing it again and take your suggestions. It's great to have an outsider's perspective. I might place it on my own site but may leave it in dropbox for now...haven't decided.
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