Need a script Guru
I have one last slide to script for a project that never ends. My creative juices have dried up and I could use a jump start or a brain transplant. Any suggestions/rewrites to make this text more conversational and less boring would be appreciated. This script should describe the benefit of visiting the "Network of Care" to a new user. The link is include in case that would help generate some ideas. Here is what the SME had to say:
Visit Lanterman's Network of Care at http://www.lanterman.networkofcare.org/.