Redundancy Principle Explainer Video - Feedback Appreciated

I think it should be "Dual", not "Duel".

Yes. . . yes it should.  Thanks.  

Great job Jerson. The pace and length of the presentation are perfect and you definitely got the concept across. Love the animation although was not keen on the lines coming out of the back of the head in the section were you are talking about how visual and auditory elements work together. I think it would be more effective if the lines came up to the eyes and then disappeared.

There  is a slight pop in the audio when you are explaining redundancy. 

Thanks Nancy,

I was worried about the pace and that the animation moved a bit fast.  I'll work on the lines coming out of the back of the head, maybe fade in from the top of the head? 

Yea I don't have one of those pop cancel attachments, just the YETI with an extra cover.  I might also move back away from the mic and see if that works next time.  

J

You could try pulling it into audacity and try to remove the pop using the noise reduction features. 

I found an option in Adobe Audition.  I'll run it through and see what happens.  

This is really great, Jerson!

I had to do an assignment like that last semester. Are you at FSU?

:-)

Nice work Jerson, not sure if you are still after feedback - but here is mine... for me the background music was too loud and took some focus away from what you were saying - particularly towards the end where you were competing with the music. Another thing for me is the use of multiple font styles, I prefer to keep font simple especially if there is a lot of colour and animation (but that is my preference).

Content made sense and yes easy enough to follow (although music at that volume was distracting)

Nice work :-)