My Latest "Music Video-Like" Experiment [Demo]
May 19, 2012
Need some feedback on a prototype that I'm working on . . .
For my former employer, I have a small Storyline project to develop a module on leaders as developers of their people. The company recently instituted development planning for all employees (separate now from annual performance planning) and this new module will be part of the new resources for management to help get them up-to-speed as developers of talent.
During the Storyline beta, I did two music videos for fun. But I've always wanted to take that experience and, if possible, in the right circumstances, apply what I learned in a e-learning course in a way that works.
So I've been playing around with the following introductory "music montage" piece as a first prototype for my client. I've seen the technique done before and am not sure what it is called (a type of mash-up?).
Normally I start a course and get right to the WIIFM to, among other things, encourage learner engagement and to get things moving. This is a more "leisurely WIIFM," almost "reflective shock and awe" to get the learner to buy into why this course's topic is important.
Questions--does the intro work? Is it too much? I wanted it shorter but it "felt right" to be as long as the musical piece that I'm using. Normally I might use something like this at the end of a course instead of the beginning.
I like the fact that a Storyline project can be effective without a lot of fancy programming--just the right choice of material and some timeline and simple graphics magic to tell a message. I could have done this in PowerPoint and exported as a movie but I wanted to do as much as I could in Storyline itself. Also, the timeline was a life-saver.
(Disclaimer: My client has not seen this prototype yet so it may or may not be something they approve or adopt. However, everything used in the intro is public knowledge.)
Thanks for any feedback.
[Updated May 23: Link to Demo v2 - thanks again everyone for all the wonderful feedback.]
41 Replies
Really nice, Gerry! I like the simplicity of the black/white/grayscale images. I also liked the way you used the zoom area about midway through. I found myself wanting a seekbar so that I could back up and re-read some of the items, and also so that I could see how far I'd progressed into the sequence. Also, I noticed the Credits link on the top bar of the player didn't seem to open anything.
I Like that Gerry, I like the black (I also notice its not pure black, nice) and white. There are a few changes I would make (only a few and only minor).
On the slide you have a lot of quotes/descriptions. I would cut these down to one per slide, with much larger text.
I would also highlight some key bits in the text in colour (I did notice you did this a couple of times).
Overall it is really nice, gives me some good ideas. Thanks for sharing
@Jeanette: Excellent point about the seekbar. Makes great sense. I just added one but because the "video" is one slide with a base layer and three layers (to accommodate the single audio track), it doesn't scrub through correctly. Things get out of sync. Bug? May have to be everything on the base layer and not use layers.
The Credits link was a placeholder for future content, but I've added a lightbox slide now to accommodate that.
@Phil: Thanks--will review and take a crack at some of your suggestions.
As always, appreciate the GREAT feedback!
I would love to see... except this is what I get when I click the link....
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Try now, Ben. I uploaded a new version incorporating Jeanette's suggestions and I forgot to make it public on Amazon S3. Sorry.
Really nice. Love the music choice and the pace of the montage. Nice Job!
With a couple of minor exceptions - I LOVE THIS.
Bruce
After watching that again, I am more impressed.
I think I was half asleep last night and didnt do an autopsy on how it was done
The first thing that came into my head today was, how did Gerry keep the same music play over many slides, then I realised this was one slide!
Well done,
THANKS for the ideas, Bruce.
Got some infographics examples that might inspire me? I've never done something like that before.
Yes, yes, on the second point. Actually, that will hit them immediately in the "regular" course content, which I still have to finish up. Want to save that for then.
The sponsor also wants two videos from two senior executives in the course--in the the usual corporate style as talking head. I may be challenged there to make them interesting but I got a couple of ideas there I'm excited to try.
Hi,
Try these two.
http://community.articulate.com/forums/p/12907/76957.aspx#76957
http://www.makeuseof.com/tag/awesome-free-tools-infographics/
Bruce
Thanks. I used many layers at first to keep things simpler and so I could focus on a single sequence (gee, I would have loved to have just a layer preview for that ) . Then I transferred the layers to the base slide.
I did keep three layers but when I realized the seekbar, that Jeanette wisely suggested above, to be accurate needed just the base layer, I transferred them also over to the base layer.
Hi Gerry,
Great message. You sure convinced me!
Taking a stab here at my reactions.
LOVED
Bothered by
Wondering about
Spatial contiguity. On the (Layer?) part that begins "Poor succession planning" I liked that the photos lined up at the bottom, but as each person faded in at the bottom, my eye was drawn away from the text, to the photo, back to the text, back to the next photo, etc.
Felt like I was working hard to go back and forth...extraneous processing? I was wondering if they could fade in near each piece of text and then maybe line up at the bottom after. Note that The 2nd and 3rd time through, it didn't bother me as much, but at that point I "knew" the material.
Hope you keep sharing. I'm learning so much from others' comments and breaking it down myself. Thank you.
Excellent feedback, Rebecca. That's exactly what i was looking for. This is a first-time effect for me and I appreciate it. I tend to over complicate things some times so simplification possibilities are very helpful.
Will be making some adjustments in the next few days. For one, want to consider doing the infographics that Bruce suggested in the sequence that you were wondering about.
Just love this community . . .
Gerry, so glad it was helpful. When communication is simply through text, it can feel so critical. I contemplated not posting. Then I thought, well, but, he clearly wants feedback or wouldn't have requested it. And he'll see that I put time into it, watch it 3 times...so feedback is thoughtful and constructive, not meant to be critical and negative. Very much looking forward to seeing progress!
Cool, Gerry. I noticed something strange on my end (Chrome on Mac) when I closed the window in the middle of the presentation. The music continued to play after the window was closed. Think it bust be a Flash player bobble on my end. Scratched my head for a bit wondering if you were being tricky with another window playing the music
Thanks, again. You're GREAT!
Yes, when I ask for feedback, I clearly want it. It's how I managed my team before I retired--everyone has something to add and that free flowing of ideas and viewpoints needs to be nurtured, encouraged, and treasured. No one of us had to have all the answers but together as a team we should know most of them--or where to find them.
Feel the same about this community.
I've made a couple of more minor tweaks from your suggestions and I'll show them later. I've been working on the first content slides in the prototype and I'm deviated a bit from what I was given in the sponsor's PowerPoint. That went right into a video of the VP and completely ignored the WIIFM that Bruce called out.
Me, tricky????
I've noticed the same thing in one other earlier SL course i was working on, though I've not seen it lately. Trying to remember if seeing that was before a current Flash player update????
Glad to see I am proving to be my usual, impactful self.....
Bruce
LOL.
It's your a peel.
lol, Bruce I dont think you put enough sun cream on. Your peeling
Right....enough of the banana....it's wombat time
Bruce
I knew it, another joke wasted, now everyone sees you as a hamster.
LOL...
Gee, growing up in high school and then college, being called a wombat was definitely not a PG-rated designation . . . [censored].
Hi Gerry,
I thought this prototype is great. I think that it will grab the learners' attention and give them the message, "here's what we're going to learn about" It's a unique way to communicate the learning objectives and build motivation (e.g. "you're right - I don't know how to do this!")
I am in agreement with all the other feedback, and here's my 2 cents:
General:
RE: George Gilder quote slide
RE: "poor succession planning" slide
All right Gerry, I think that this is a nickel or dimes-worth. Hope it helps!
Jill
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