Sarah,
Thanks for the courtesy of your reply. I understand the revision, and agree that it’s good instructional design to take advantage of a teachable moment to provide a correct answer right when the learner is wondering, “So what is it?”
As I mentioned in my earlier message, I would like to use your piece as an example in a workshop. Please reply with your permission to do so. It is through the San Diego chapter of ATD.
For these monthly workshops, I try to have a guest presenter. I understand that you are employed by Articulate, which may influence your being able to accept an invite to be a guest presenter. Please let me know it that would be of interest to you, or even possible given your association with Articulate.
We have already had as guest presenters eLearning challenge entrants Samuel Apata and Jodi Sansone.
I look forward to hearing from you.