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DanSweigert
Community Member
Here's mine, it's an example of the redundancy principle. The first is the original redundant version of a story:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2/story.html
And here's how I fleshed it out into something much more engaging:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2solution/story.html
And here's my blog where I talk about both examples:
https://dansweigert.wordpress.com/2016/04/15/redundancy-and-coherence/
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2/story.html
And here's how I fleshed it out into something much more engaging:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2solution/story.html
And here's my blog where I talk about both examples:
https://dansweigert.wordpress.com/2016/04/15/redundancy-and-coherence/
LindaLorenzetti
9 years agoSuper Hero
Nice example Dan. The second is much more engaging than the first.
- DanSweigert9 years agoCommunity MemberThanks Linda!