Hi Jesse,
I find it engaging and Interactive.
I feel, I would have done something similar to what you have done here.
However I would like to highlight the usage of text, Can it be reduced?
I believe, Participating is important than perfecting it within!
I really appreciate the work that you have done. :)
Hello Rahul, Thank you for your kind words.
Usually this will be at least 5 individual slides where I will have more space to pace the layout. Especially I have a heritage habit for formal presentations that don't use any font size smaller than 20.
Once upon a time I learnt that human can only process a certain small amount of information by watching or by listening, so you have a solid point. I will proceed with one layer per bullet point to prevent the overload in real life situation. That is, not reducing the amount of information, but slow down the pace to deliver the same amount.
Jesse, I love the use of the dial and how you made it accessible with the keyboard also. I do believe there are alot of ideas going on the screen at once for each topic. The definition and several quotes of different topics, imagining a team and goals to achieve. I did not pick those up on the "Before version" I recommend breaking some of the information and instead of "imagining a team", have a picture of a team and each person speaking the quote you want as the dial is moved visually representing the values of the scrum team. The other details and goals may be addressed later. Just a thought. Do Love it!!! Great job!
Thank you for your insights Patti. The ultimate writing for me is always: the keyword is not used throughout the text, but it is all over the place when you read in between the lines.
To achieve that your approach will be the way to go! 👍
