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DanSweigert
Community Member
Here's mine, it's an example of the redundancy principle. The first is the original redundant version of a story:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2/story.html
And here's how I fleshed it out into something much more engaging:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2solution/story.html
And here's my blog where I talk about both examples:
https://dansweigert.wordpress.com/2016/04/15/redundancy-and-coherence/
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2/story.html
And here's how I fleshed it out into something much more engaging:
http://cropcirclecollective.com/bad2solution/story.html
And here's my blog where I talk about both examples:
https://dansweigert.wordpress.com/2016/04/15/redundancy-and-coherence/
DeeAnn
9 years agoCommunity Member
Such great examples of the redundancy principle. The redesign was clean and demonstrated the principle's effectiveness by not including printed text and spoken text. What came to mind when I saw the first example are the PowerPoint slides in apresentations that has text that the presenter reads word for word.
- DanSweigert9 years agoCommunity MemberThanks Dee Ann, I always recommend alternatives to putting a lot of text on the screen and especially when it's redundant.