I wish I had time to comment on everyone's entry, but I especially wanted to say welcome to @Donielle (I haven't used the zoom feature in Storyline yet - so this is now on my list to check out) and @Eric.
I also really like your entry @Richard - great concept and very tastefully done. I'll be trying this out as well!
@Simon - very clever entry that really made me think about navigation options.
@Jackie - I loved your entry. Looks like you've had an amazing journey to get to where you are. This explains where your ideas and creativity come from - and shows us all building transferable skills on the way to becoming an e-learning designer is worthwhile.
Thanks for the feedback @Jackie. I've just gone in to fix the slide with the fuel can and map - I had fade out animations set on these so that would be the problem. It's interesting when you spend so long developing something and think you've checked it out thoroughly - but I guess I didn't hesitate long enough on this slide to pick this up - so thanks for the heads up! However, when I published the new version, I had major issues with the fonts not publishing correctly - this is from my computer at work and I know it will publish correctly from home, so I've left this for now. This is very weird because the fonts look OK on the screen - anyone have an explanation for this?
I'll need to think about the ability to go back to parts of the tour - initially I was going to incorporate this, but this will take a little more creativity - although I agree it's worth doing. I just didn't want a simple "previous" and "next" button on the bottom, so I'll customise this somehow.
Glad you found the "easter egg" - this is what we're calling something on the slide that you have to hunt for isn't it?!!