the first project

Dec 11, 2017

Dear Allison, 

Hi again. I finished nearly my project, and I feel it's good enough. Could you please review it and tell me what do you think of it? and give me an assessment out of ten as it's my first project. 

Thanks a lot in advance. 

Regards, 

 

3 Replies
Phil Mayor

Thanks for sharing. I think it needs more work visually.

I dont think the animated Gif at the beginning adds anything and if i am not mistaken it is a man not Athena.

The image on slide 1.2 has had the aspect ration skewed.

I would probably swap the transitions to simple subtle fades.

Slide 1.8 the question is incomplete.

Slide 1.10 this has a jarring change in style and is incongruent with the style of the course I would strongly consider changing how this looks.

On the first slide remove the Previous button, on the last slide remove the next button.

It may be better to go wit a custom navigation, perhaps submit each interaction when they make a choice.

I would look into changing the look and feel of the player, removing the volume button and seeker, as well as the menu, resources and sidebar.

I would also get rid of the video at the end and add in something more appropriate.

 

Hope this helps a bit.

 

Mohammed Amer

Thanks a lot for your review on my work. I really appreciate it and I am trying to edit it taking into consideration you advice.

However, I don't know how to do this part "On the first slide remove the Previous button, on the last slide remove the next button." Could you tell me where I can go to control these objects?

I also want to ask what do you mean when you say,"It may be better to go wit a custom navigation, perhaps submit each interaction when they make a choice." ! I don't really get it.

Thanks :)

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