DEMO: Revising bloated e-learning prose

Dec 07, 2012

Like you, I spend a lot of my time cleaning up the prose provided by SMEs. In this Storyline presentation, I give a few tips (and a bit of practice) on revising bloated e-learning prose. Hope you find it helpful.

Revising Bloated E-Learning Prose

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Cathy Edwards

You wouldn't believe how quickly I forgot about this. And what a coincidence! Last week, I was asking myself this question again. I have my own way of shortening scripts, but wanted to be able to share what I do with my new team. Then I found my old forum post (Lesson writing and voice-over script standards) from 6 years ago and through a little more searching found a link to one of your presentations with the eLearning Guild. Then, I created a short video showing how to use the Paramedic Method and posted a Vlog on our team's internal site. Thank you so much!

Lesson writing and voice-over script standards

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