just created couple of storyline samples and i would like to share with you guys, and hopefully to get some constructive feedback to improve my design.
On the first sample I got a little confused with which areas I had visited...maybe you could start them off as black and white then as the user clicks that area changes to colour.
Second sample - really liked it...are the characters custom built?
Good job. Great use of the graphics in Sample 1 and in Sample 2 I like the way you made the demo and activity a real life scenario the user would have to deal with. Loved the character waving to me when I was done.
John, Mechanically and visually Demo 1 is very good. I agree with Wendy, I'd love to see some progress markers to let me know where I've been and to reinforce what I've learned.
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Hi John
good job.
On the first sample I got a little confused with which areas I had visited...maybe you could start them off as black and white then as the user clicks that area changes to colour.
Second sample - really liked it...are the characters custom built?
Thanks for the feedback Wendy!
No, the characters are provided by the graphic artist
Thanks Nick! I am thinking of using a similar layout for our onboarding program for graduates.
Another similar example created by Tom Kuhlmann.
I really like demo 1, John. Great use of graphics / slide transition.
Thanks Chris!
Good job. Great use of the graphics in Sample 1 and in Sample 2 I like the way you made the demo and activity a real life scenario the user would have to deal with. Loved the character waving to me when I was done.
Thanks Wendy!
John, Mechanically and visually Demo 1 is very good. I agree with Wendy, I'd love to see some progress markers to let me know where I've been and to reinforce what I've learned.
Good job
Chris
Thanks Chris! I will add that feature when i start the project next month.
Lovely samples!!! first one is just wonderful.
Thanks Ravindra
Great work John! Sample 1 was my favorite of the two and like Wendy mentioned some indication of the areas visited would be helpful.
thanks Matthew!
Good Job John, Inshallah we will implement something similar from your course here
Thanks Mohamed!
Great work! I like the way you design the Sample 1, something new especially the way you navigate the slides.
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