Feedback on a short presentation
I'm working towards adding freelance e-learning design and development to my current graphic and web design services.
I'm producing a short presentation for my portfolio to describe what kind of services I'll offer and would like some feedback from anyone here willing to take a couple of minutes to view this.
Note: The voiceover you hear is me and my first attempt at doing this. I probably will re-do most of the voice as I had a bit of a cold the day I recorded this.
I appreciate any comments from those willing to offer them.