First storyline presentation
Jun 12, 2012
Hi All,
I am still very new to elearning and course development but have come to know and love this community for its great support, feedback and occasional belly laugh (still chuckling at "my little soldier").
With great trepidation but the knowledge that you will be gentle with me (I hope!), I post my first Storyline presentation for the considered opinion and feedback of the articulate community.
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/84464509/website%20promotion%20published%20output/story.swf
Many thanks in advance
IJ
4 Replies
Hi Ingrid
Its always brave to ask fr feedback.
Thsi link will work better https://dl.dropbox.com/u/84464509/website%20promotion%20published%20output/story.html
I dont think you need the how to use this section to be part of the course, you could offer it on the home page. I think it should be an option but not forced on the user.
On the PRN consulting slide, I dont like the way it switches to a version of atsumi floating in the air with half a body, makes you realise she is just a group of images. This happens a lot throughout.
In the speech bubble it may better to show icons that relate to each thought instead of atsumi, so I can see at a glance what you are going to save me.
I would also add visited states to your buttons, so I can see where I have been.
TBH I was a little lost at times, possibly because of the navigation pane and buttons on the slide.
Overall its a good starting point, well done
Phil
Hi Phil,
Thanks for the constructive, and incredibly prompt feedback (and link fix) - much appreciated.
Hadn't thought of using icons/images in the thought clouds, great idea. Making the "how to use" section optional is also much more logical.
Now that I look at it again, I can see your point; will see if I can fix by making sure I use cropped version of full image that goes to the edge of the slide to avoid the "floating" appearance.
Yes, I can see how that would happen. I was trying to make sure the learner can go back to a slide if they want to via the navigation pane, but maybe this isn't necessary?
Or there is a less confusing way to do it?
Again, many thanks - nothing ventured, nothing gained!
IJ
Hi Ingrid,
Fair play to you for putting your elearning baby out into the community! I'll be gentle - promise!
I agree with all of Phil's observations..what you have done is a great starting point. And here are some more points to consider
This is a firm start Ingrid!! Worth the venture on my end
Thanks for sharing and being brave...
Eimear
Hi Eimar,
Thanks so much for taking the time to provide such helpful feedback - greatly appreciated.
So many great ideas, it has really inspired me to get back in there and do some revision - terrific to have a fresh set of eyes look at it (mine had become somewhat jaded after the nth time through!)
Icons, tweaked colour scheme and navigation as well a visit to commoncraft.com and I'm on my way!
With humble gratitude,
IJ
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