Animation Practice

Mar 21, 2019

So, I've been trying to improve my artistic skills within articulate. I created this short animation, though not short in time invested. 

Always love feedback!!!

http://bit.ly/2FiFZ2p 

 

10 Replies
Allen Wong

Good work. Creating good animations in SL can be tricky and you have to think a little outside the box. I'm still getting my head around 360 but back in 2, I used to always nest animated objects in other objects so I could have some control of where they'd grow and spin from.

Wondering if it would be possible create 2 or 3 versions of the fire and get SL to alternate through them to get a moving fire look?

Libby Farrelly

Hi Chris.  I thought the timing and ordering of items on the stars/moon/tent/fire slide was perfect.  As a viewer, it gave me time to appreciate each item before having to process the next item moving. 

Also, I really loved the continuity with the circle going from lens to car wheels to moon.  One suggestion is to keep that theme throughout all the slides - maybe the circle on the first slide having the same size and shading?  And maybe the car drives onto the next slide and all but a single wheel disappears which rises to the sky to be the moon? 

Great job!

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