Hi guys my team just finished with a mini game to test student on basic vocabulary words. We would welcome any and all feedback on how it could be improved. Thank you all in advance. The game was inspired by Mr. Amar Kulshreshtha. Click here to see it in action.
I had fun trying this out. Here are a few ideas about your game:
Why not include the instructions as part of the game. You could have visual onscreen instructions like arrows on the screen. Maybe have the car collect the first piece of fruit as a demo, then allow the user to take over. That way you're straight into the action. It also makes it more intuitive.
Also, once I've crashed, there's no way to start over unless I refresh the whole thing. I'd love something like 3 lives and a restart/try again button.
Maybe some basic sound effects too, like a small sound when you collect the right fruit or a crash noise when you hit the wrong one.
Wow, thank you for such helpful feedback Jason. I'll be sure to work on it and implement them as soon as I can. I especially like the point about adding visual instructions on screen great idea.
Thanks Amar I will add the SFX and implement the advice then post up the results. Such a great community here :) As for the balloon game Amar: It's a very cute and fun game !
Review of Balloon game:
When a balloon is double clicked it sometimes freezes and crashes not sure if it is due to my browser. On second slide if you click restart then click on a balloon the games locks up on FireFox. But besides from this the game is great and fun to play awesome work Amar :)
Maybe add a power up so players can pop all the balloons on screen
or the ability to have the birds help pop the balloons when they fly across the screen.
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Hi Vince,
I had fun trying this out. Here are a few ideas about your game:
Wow, thank you for such helpful feedback Jason. I'll be sure to work on it and implement them as soon as I can. I especially like the point about adding visual instructions on screen great idea.
Thanks Vince for appreciating my work. I am glad that it could inspire you.
Went through your game. You have come up with a really good idea. You can also have a look at a similar game which I had created some time ago. http://amarkulshreshtha.blogspot.in/2015/10/e-learning-challenges-102-gamify-e.html
I would like to suggest some points which would be helpful for your game.
For SFX you can download from the site: http://www.freesfx.co.uk/sfx
Hope these suggestions will be helpful to you. :)
Thanks Amar I will add the SFX and implement the advice then post up the results. Such a great community here :) As for the balloon game Amar: It's a very cute and fun game !
Review of Balloon game:
When a balloon is double clicked it sometimes freezes and crashes not sure if it is due to my browser. On second slide if you click restart then click on a balloon the games locks up on FireFox. But besides from this the game is great and fun to play awesome work Amar :)
very nice design all reply before are the same so how did you make the road moving?
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